Post by Punky on Jan 13, 2009 18:26:42 GMT -7
Name: Dawnstar
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Position/Age: 24 moons, ThunderClan leader
Appearance:She has a dark grey pelt with light silver speckles running from the sides of her face all the way to the tip of her tail. She also has white on her paws(courtesy of her father) and chest.She is a very small she-cat which adds to her swiftness and her fighting skills. Compared to her petite body and head she has an abnormally long tail witch gives her an awesome sense of balance. Also in addition to her stream-lined, tiny build it is natural that she has very small paws, It is also uncanny that she can sneak up right behind her prey and not make a single sound. This makes her a deadly and efficient hunter. But all pales in comparison to her beautiful spear-shaped head witch is also tiny like the rest of her body. Her gorgeous eyes are truly a sight to behold. They are ice blue like the palest of glacier ice. and the steel grey flecks complement them beautifully.Her nose and pads of her paws are pitch-black(thanks to mom)witch complement her dark grey pelt. But fate has been cruel to this little she-cat leaving her with an ugly scar running from the middle of her spine to the middle of her back led. Her ears are regular sized, siting normal where most cats are. her ears have thick tufts on their peak. Giving her a wild appearance.
Personality: Because of her bloody past she is very,very shy to new cats. But it helped her in ways training with a master never could. It gave her hate and anger beyond belief. she has such a large amount of hatred for such a little cat. But her nature is on the tender side. she loves to play and nurture other cats kits. That is why, most often she is chosen as a baby-sitter for the kits while the parents are out hunting. She has a big heart and welcomes strays or rouges into her clan(but she is very apprehensive whilst doing so.)
History: She was born in river clan in leaf-bare, she was always the smallest. her parents Solpelt (dad) and Rainpaw (mother) where always so proud of their kits. her siblings Angelkit swiftkit and thornkit where probably the smartest kits born to their father. but one cool evening in green-leaf a few lone warriors thought it would be fun to murder the new arrivals, since their own kits where not getting as much attention. two of the lone warriors caused a ruckus outside of Riverclan camp. the whole clan (excluding Solpelt and Rainpaw) went to see what was going on. The other two Mousetail and Fernwhisker, went to attack the kits, But they didn't know that Solpelt was guarding them. Their plan hinged on Solpelt running off with the clan but they where wrong, dead wrong. Solpelt fought Mousetail and Fernwhisker, But ended up getting knocked out. and Rainwhisker clawed,bit and fought for her kits lives unfortunately River face grabbed her by the scruff of the neck and threw her against the wall of the nursery, knocking her out as well. UN guarded the kits began to squeal for their parents to wake up but it was too late Mousetail,Fernwhisker and Riverface murdered two of the three kits and ran off with Dawnkit. While Mousetail,Fernwhisker and Riverface where walking back to their clan, Dawnkit managed to squeeze out of Mousetail's jaws and try to hobble back to her clan, but not without sustaining a life-threating gash from the middle of her back to the middle of her back leg, leaving bone and muscle exposed. For the next three weeks her parents went searching for her but never succeeded. One bright sunny moring in green-leaf Silvermist, Thunderclan's medicine cat found Dawnkit in a clump of holly, shivering,bleeding,and close to death. Silvermist fought back tears as she picked up Dawnkit and brought her back to thunder clan. six weeks later in leaf-bare she awoke to see Silvermists worried face and Snowpelts gentle nudging. "m-m-mom?" Dawnkit breathed. Silvermist's face lit-up like a fourth of July firecracker, her kind eyes filled with tears as she assured Dawnkit everything was OK.
As Dawnkit grew from kitten to cat she was loved. Her fighting skills exceeded the apprentice level. Even rouges began to fear this little warrior. She was pretty much set for life being a very powerful apprentice. But it was at her warrior ceremony that she saw the one thing that made her shake with a rage so powerful it was not to be believed. there sitting in front of her at great rock where her family's killers. Mousetail,Fernwhisker and Riverface. That did it. She jumped off the rock like somebody had thrown her off and Landed right on Mousetail's smug face. Leaving her master Oakpelt just to look after her in utter horror and fear. The air whooshed out of Mousetails lungs as she hit the ground with a sickening thwack. Dawnpaw's teeth and claws raked into Mousetail's body and neck. She screamed for her mate Riverface to help her. But he just stood there frozen with fear. Fernwhisker jumped on Dawnpaws back but she shrugged him off. Dawnpaws jaws sought and found Mousetails neck and chomped down crushing her windpipe and shattering her neck bone. The entire clan watched in utter horror as the bloody war raged on. Mousetails struggles became weak and her mews turned out to be more glutteral sounds. Finally Mousetail's body became weak as she was suffocated. When that was over Dawnpaw turned to face Fernwhisker and Riverface. Their fear scent enveloped the camp. their tails went between their legs and their ears flat against their skulls as the stared at Dawnpaw's mouth. She was panting heavily and saliva was mixed with blood as it oozed down her sharp canine teeth. She let out a feral snarl as she took one step closer to the murders. the two remaining cats Fernwhisker and Riverface shot off into the forest with Dawnpaw hot on their heels. The only thing the clan heard was hissing and alot of wet ripping sounds and leaves rustling in the bush. After about five minutes Dawnpaw emerged from the bush. dried blood matted her fur as she hobbled back into the clearing. But thats not What made Oakpelt shudder or Silvermist turn into Snowpelts shoulder whispering "oh no". It was her scar. The ugly scar had opened up and was bleeding something fierce. She turned to her clanmates, gave then a weak smile and collapsed in the clearing...
Dawnfire(warrior name) was a very helpful, and strong warrior but she was only a warrior for a short time before she became the clans deputy. Dawnfire's efforts as deputy was a huge success. She drove out cat's from other clans and rouges. But she just couldn't drive out loners and kittypets. But soon the clan leader became ill. and soon later he died. Dawnfire was so sad he was like a father to her. But the day she became leader she fell in love with Eaglefeather the clans new deputy. his chocolate brown fur and black spots made her feel like she was glowing. he flashed her a smile and they knew at that moment they would be perfect for each other.
Family Members: Deceased
IC Example Post: Dawnstar rubbed aganst her mate Eaglefeather's fur, filling her nose with his sweet scent. Eaglefeather's tongue caressed her ear as she let a low purr slip through her mouth. "Good morning Dawnstar"
She looked up to face his dark amber eyes he was probably twice her size. easily. He was staring down at her with a look deep concern. "What??"
"That is an ugly scar you have there"
She sighed. "would you please stop" she chided gently.
"Fine" his deep throaty meow
reminded her of her father. She smiled and stood up to stretch. Dawnstars fur was matted heavily from moss and mud. She was acting like a kit yesterday when it was raining.
"Your pelt is a mess"
"I know Eaglefeather. i know" she sat down and began to lick the unsightly debris from her shimmering dark Grey fur.
Rules Password: May StarClan guide your soul
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Position/Age: 24 moons, ThunderClan leader
Appearance:She has a dark grey pelt with light silver speckles running from the sides of her face all the way to the tip of her tail. She also has white on her paws(courtesy of her father) and chest.She is a very small she-cat which adds to her swiftness and her fighting skills. Compared to her petite body and head she has an abnormally long tail witch gives her an awesome sense of balance. Also in addition to her stream-lined, tiny build it is natural that she has very small paws, It is also uncanny that she can sneak up right behind her prey and not make a single sound. This makes her a deadly and efficient hunter. But all pales in comparison to her beautiful spear-shaped head witch is also tiny like the rest of her body. Her gorgeous eyes are truly a sight to behold. They are ice blue like the palest of glacier ice. and the steel grey flecks complement them beautifully.Her nose and pads of her paws are pitch-black(thanks to mom)witch complement her dark grey pelt. But fate has been cruel to this little she-cat leaving her with an ugly scar running from the middle of her spine to the middle of her back led. Her ears are regular sized, siting normal where most cats are. her ears have thick tufts on their peak. Giving her a wild appearance.
Personality: Because of her bloody past she is very,very shy to new cats. But it helped her in ways training with a master never could. It gave her hate and anger beyond belief. she has such a large amount of hatred for such a little cat. But her nature is on the tender side. she loves to play and nurture other cats kits. That is why, most often she is chosen as a baby-sitter for the kits while the parents are out hunting. She has a big heart and welcomes strays or rouges into her clan(but she is very apprehensive whilst doing so.)
History: She was born in river clan in leaf-bare, she was always the smallest. her parents Solpelt (dad) and Rainpaw (mother) where always so proud of their kits. her siblings Angelkit swiftkit and thornkit where probably the smartest kits born to their father. but one cool evening in green-leaf a few lone warriors thought it would be fun to murder the new arrivals, since their own kits where not getting as much attention. two of the lone warriors caused a ruckus outside of Riverclan camp. the whole clan (excluding Solpelt and Rainpaw) went to see what was going on. The other two Mousetail and Fernwhisker, went to attack the kits, But they didn't know that Solpelt was guarding them. Their plan hinged on Solpelt running off with the clan but they where wrong, dead wrong. Solpelt fought Mousetail and Fernwhisker, But ended up getting knocked out. and Rainwhisker clawed,bit and fought for her kits lives unfortunately River face grabbed her by the scruff of the neck and threw her against the wall of the nursery, knocking her out as well. UN guarded the kits began to squeal for their parents to wake up but it was too late Mousetail,Fernwhisker and Riverface murdered two of the three kits and ran off with Dawnkit. While Mousetail,Fernwhisker and Riverface where walking back to their clan, Dawnkit managed to squeeze out of Mousetail's jaws and try to hobble back to her clan, but not without sustaining a life-threating gash from the middle of her back to the middle of her back leg, leaving bone and muscle exposed. For the next three weeks her parents went searching for her but never succeeded. One bright sunny moring in green-leaf Silvermist, Thunderclan's medicine cat found Dawnkit in a clump of holly, shivering,bleeding,and close to death. Silvermist fought back tears as she picked up Dawnkit and brought her back to thunder clan. six weeks later in leaf-bare she awoke to see Silvermists worried face and Snowpelts gentle nudging. "m-m-mom?" Dawnkit breathed. Silvermist's face lit-up like a fourth of July firecracker, her kind eyes filled with tears as she assured Dawnkit everything was OK.
As Dawnkit grew from kitten to cat she was loved. Her fighting skills exceeded the apprentice level. Even rouges began to fear this little warrior. She was pretty much set for life being a very powerful apprentice. But it was at her warrior ceremony that she saw the one thing that made her shake with a rage so powerful it was not to be believed. there sitting in front of her at great rock where her family's killers. Mousetail,Fernwhisker and Riverface. That did it. She jumped off the rock like somebody had thrown her off and Landed right on Mousetail's smug face. Leaving her master Oakpelt just to look after her in utter horror and fear. The air whooshed out of Mousetails lungs as she hit the ground with a sickening thwack. Dawnpaw's teeth and claws raked into Mousetail's body and neck. She screamed for her mate Riverface to help her. But he just stood there frozen with fear. Fernwhisker jumped on Dawnpaws back but she shrugged him off. Dawnpaws jaws sought and found Mousetails neck and chomped down crushing her windpipe and shattering her neck bone. The entire clan watched in utter horror as the bloody war raged on. Mousetails struggles became weak and her mews turned out to be more glutteral sounds. Finally Mousetail's body became weak as she was suffocated. When that was over Dawnpaw turned to face Fernwhisker and Riverface. Their fear scent enveloped the camp. their tails went between their legs and their ears flat against their skulls as the stared at Dawnpaw's mouth. She was panting heavily and saliva was mixed with blood as it oozed down her sharp canine teeth. She let out a feral snarl as she took one step closer to the murders. the two remaining cats Fernwhisker and Riverface shot off into the forest with Dawnpaw hot on their heels. The only thing the clan heard was hissing and alot of wet ripping sounds and leaves rustling in the bush. After about five minutes Dawnpaw emerged from the bush. dried blood matted her fur as she hobbled back into the clearing. But thats not What made Oakpelt shudder or Silvermist turn into Snowpelts shoulder whispering "oh no". It was her scar. The ugly scar had opened up and was bleeding something fierce. She turned to her clanmates, gave then a weak smile and collapsed in the clearing...
Dawnfire(warrior name) was a very helpful, and strong warrior but she was only a warrior for a short time before she became the clans deputy. Dawnfire's efforts as deputy was a huge success. She drove out cat's from other clans and rouges. But she just couldn't drive out loners and kittypets. But soon the clan leader became ill. and soon later he died. Dawnfire was so sad he was like a father to her. But the day she became leader she fell in love with Eaglefeather the clans new deputy. his chocolate brown fur and black spots made her feel like she was glowing. he flashed her a smile and they knew at that moment they would be perfect for each other.
Family Members: Deceased
IC Example Post: Dawnstar rubbed aganst her mate Eaglefeather's fur, filling her nose with his sweet scent. Eaglefeather's tongue caressed her ear as she let a low purr slip through her mouth. "Good morning Dawnstar"
She looked up to face his dark amber eyes he was probably twice her size. easily. He was staring down at her with a look deep concern. "What??"
"That is an ugly scar you have there"
She sighed. "would you please stop" she chided gently.
"Fine" his deep throaty meow
reminded her of her father. She smiled and stood up to stretch. Dawnstars fur was matted heavily from moss and mud. She was acting like a kit yesterday when it was raining.
"Your pelt is a mess"
"I know Eaglefeather. i know" she sat down and began to lick the unsightly debris from her shimmering dark Grey fur.
Rules Password: May StarClan guide your soul