Orangestar//RiverClan//

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[/i] Not knowing the answer Orangecloud visited her elder mother and asked of her what she thought. Her reply was simple. What would your brother do? Orangecloud knew the answer to this question so of course she rose up to the challenge just like her brother would do.

After becoming Orangestar, she started to do things that she thought were best for the clan. Some questioned her methods but in the end they realized that what she was doing was best for the clan. It benefited them all. Orangestar has only been leader for two short moons but already the people of the clan have total faith in her.[/size][/ul]

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[Admin]

Good, good! Such a sad thing to happen to a kit, though That actually makes me want to go kick a fox. xD But I watched Fox and the Hound the other day, so I don't want to. So very confusing :/

ANYWAYS. Just one thing I ask of you before acceptance! Could you please add more to her appearance? You have enough paragraphs, yes, but there's not much detail about her. Add in her voice, her stride, the proportions of her body! Are her legs long and strong? Perhaps she has a deformed claw? Any scars marring her pretty pelt? Just give us a clear picture of your kitty!

Good luck with your modifications!

--Kiyana

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Orangestar! :'D

Your modifications are perfect, she's accepted!

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